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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Rating: |
Aug 3, 2005 |
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I read the other Jane story first, and this does
suffer a bit by comparison -- but only a bit.
It's shorter, less detailed, less gripping...but
only in comparison with the other one. I think
that, in any case, this one well deserves a 9.
Even in the best stories on this site, I
invariably find a few errors (and sometimes
more than a few). I noticed none in the other
Jane story and only one here (using "contact"
as a verb...nowadays a venial sin). Whether
there were none to notice, or whether the
stories were so well done that my eagle eye was
simply mesmerized, who can say? I can say,
however, that I look forward to many more of
Jane's adventures. (9/10)
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