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Island of Pleasure and Submission
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jul 10, 2005)
(This month 11382 readers) (Total 20013 readers) |
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An elderly swinging couple takes a vacation to an island where blacks rule and whites submits. This is one of my newer stories that will be continued unlike the older ones I have posted here. I will continue posting the older ones if permitted by the site moderators till depleted and hope to keep the newer series updated at least monthly. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 11, 2006 |
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The idea of a pleasure island is of course great.
With a more subtil approach I would have quoted higher (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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with the exception of 1 or 2 stories i read by you that i found weak, you are very consistant with all your writings (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mark James
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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The S/M island is a tried and true theme. I've used it myself in some stuff that is as yet unpublished.
At times I had trouble following because of subject/verb and/or tense disagreement. I would recommend reading your work aloud before submittign it. That helps to catch many of the errors that can sneak by your eyes on the screen.
The story plot was interesting. A kind of fantasy island for interracial fantasies come true. I liked the line when the the husband saw the other guy's equipment and knew his cock would be useless to his wife forever. Following that up with him on his knees for the black Master created a nice sense of humiliation.
With island getaways, certain things come built in. For example, you can establish rules right away. In this case, white people slaves, black people Masters/Mistreses. That saves alot of exposition for set up.
Nice job, thanks for your version of Fantasy Island. Is Mr. Roarke going to pop up? (8/10)
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