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The Taming of the Muse
Author: Mad Lews
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(Added on Jul 10, 2005)
(This month 8913 readers) (Total 13271 readers) |
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A writer turns to his local Genie for help with a stubborn muse. ( another little quirky offbeat story before I get back to the serious business of sadistic domination) |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Clevernick
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May 16, 2007 |
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A story that can make you laugh out loud while remaining hot. And of course every writer will identify.
This one is more polished, with no distracting grammar or spelling errors. (If there are a couple, they didn't catch my eye; that's what counts.)
The eroticism was toned down, possibly to keep the story fresh and funny. So that's good. But I don't think it can be 10/10 without being a bit more horn-inducing. (9/10)
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nikita
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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Mad, I looove the humor in this story...Of course all the technical stuff is great. I just wanted a little more out of the ending...All the foreplay was sooo good, I was sooo ready...and at then end, you popped early...WTF? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2005)
- I would hope that you would understand that what happens between an artist and his muse is really a private affair. Blue happens to be very shy about such matters and I'm just not the type to flick and flutter about and then announce it to the whole world. What kind of pervert do you take me for? Besides the story's more about Jinn and me, Blue just got stuck in the middle (did I say that?).
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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I loved the narrative structure, the tone, the fairy wing flutter technique, the drunken Genie and of course the trap recipe. Then, I could not help thinking that the protagonist got off extremely lucky in his risky endeavour, messing around with the twilight people like this. Or maybe I have been reading too much of Eoin Colfer's 'Artemis Fowl' series lately... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Aug 17, 2005)
- Truth be told the Fey folk rarely do treat me this well, but it be fiction so I gentled their temperament a bit for the readers enjoyment. Also to give proper credit, Jinn is much more instructive than vindictive so things didn't go as far as they seemed in what we laughingly call reality. Still your point is well taken, Should you make a sticky mess of that many Fairies' wings there would be hell to pay, no matter how great the need or cause.
- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Aug 18, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Jul 13, 2005 |
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Trust Mad Lews to attempts something new. Interesting little ditty.
(Metaphor perhaps?)
Hope the author will move on to something more substantial.
Rule of Three is acctually rule of FIVE (4. no more wishes. 5.don't trust the Genie anyway. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- Sorry you were not A-MUSED. Rules are rules and three it is, 'sides if you can't trust a drunken Genie who can you trust?
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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Wonderful, whimsical, weird. Exactly what was promised! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2005)
- My goodness M'lord, a nine from thee. You must be mellowing with the approach of age. Either that or you've become inured to my scribbling and were seduced by the promise of something more mainstream (for this site) in the future. I should warn you even as a sadist I can be "amusingly quirky in a bizarre kind of way".
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LordVetinari
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2005)
- Sadistic and quirky are a good mix. This piece demonstrates unquestioned mastery of the quirky. Now show me sadistic! :-)
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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Liked it Lew. Now get back to work on the horny stuff. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2005)
- Your wish, my command or something like that. Now let me see if I can find that damn muse. I know I left her around here somewhere.
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