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An Unexpected Visit
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jul 7, 2005)
(This month 17869 readers) (Total 32849 readers) |
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Mother shows up at son house after his marriage to see how he is doing only to gets the surprise of her life and afterwards. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jul 9, 2005 |
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I have to say that was much better written and only once did the author mention the phrase. Much improved. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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the story was good, but the synopisis let me a bit confused (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
kring
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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Continue this one. I like it. What about some body modiciations on Amanda ? (8/10)
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