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Miss Pratt's Singer
Author: justin benedict
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(Added on Jul 7, 2005)
(This month 18369 readers) (Total 33414 readers) |
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Claudia O is a famous singer...but when she's in Miss Pratt's dungeon, she's just a cringing slave! |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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what i like about your work, is that you go to different generes, mm/fm/f/f ect so there is a great variety in your work (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jul 9, 2005 |
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It is a very good story that could be improved with a bit of editing. You show flashes of brilliance with your dialogue and humor. Perhaps you could depend a little less on descriptive narration and little more on dialogue (I know subs should be seen and not heard but..) that allows your characters to describe themselves (and each other) through words and actions and they become more believable and lifelike.
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Dododecapod
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Jul 9, 2005 |
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This is not bad. The combination of sex and humour is always welcome, and in this case quite well done. You've managed a very good bit of characterisation, and a most enjoyable story so far. (8/10)
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lex ludite
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Jul 7, 2005 |
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Miss Pratt is a great character and I thoroughly enjoy the humor that you toss in. However Miss Pratt would go up one side of you and down the other with her favorite cane to make you atone for the miserable job of editing you have done,or perhaps, not done! What's with all the random capitalization, I thought she had beaten that out of you? Are you in big trouble or are you in big trouble? Since I'm in a good mood from your good humor I'll let you off with a warning this time,but look out if this ever happens again! This rating assumes that Claudia O will be making an appearance shortly (8/10)
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