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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
tina.matthews
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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It is an excellent read, you really have it in you, what good writers have.The only thing is that you need to pay more attention to the punctuation and more importantly dont keep most of it in a passive voice.(Do I sound like your english teacher?*sorry*)
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I liked it when Elaine (do i have the spelling right?) choose not to marry and be sold, just for her Father. I hope somewhere down the way she finds love again. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
MegsMaster
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Jul 9, 2005 |
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I like the theme very much and hope that it will prgress to the slave brothel. It is a bit difficult to read in large block paragraphs and would have been easier had it been split up less regularly. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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enjoyable where to from here?? (6/10)
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