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Missy's Misbehavior
Author: Twentythree
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(Added on Jul 3, 2005)
(This month 20142 readers) (Total 40988 readers) |
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A harsh spanking and brutal punishment of an early teen girl bring her closer to a schoolmate who had experienced similar punishments. The girls become friends and learn a lot about their own sexuality and each others. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 30, 2007 |
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nothing nicer then a synposis that actualy give you the idea of the story, and the story is what it is said to be (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 13, 2006 |
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I tend to follow the remarks of Lakewood.
Less exageration and more plausibility would make the story excellent. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jul 6, 2005 |
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Even a modicum of plausibility would have been
nice. The scene in gym class, for example, is
so over-the-top that it is ludicrous, rather
than sexy. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jul 6, 2005 |
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While you delievered what the synopsis says, this is a story that could of had more chapters. Chapters like, how her home, school life changes. You could of expanded also on the friendship between the two girls. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jul 3, 2005 |
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I liked it. It delivers exactly what the synopsis promised! (8/10)
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