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The Pick Up
Author: Master S
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(Added on Jul 3, 2005)
(This month 51291 readers) (Total 59528 readers) |
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A Dom and sub role play a dirty old man picking up a preteen girl at the mall and seducing her. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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No bad for a role play. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 3, 2005 |
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the story was worth reading but offered nothing spectaular in it (7/10)
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