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Marissa
Author: curiouscat
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(Added on Jun 21, 2005)
(This month 11998 readers) (Total 25177 readers) |
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A teen naively clears his dominant ex-girlfriends financial debt to him in exchange for two days of servitude. |
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Jun 25, 2005 |
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Too little, too short. Over a period of 48 hours the description of the things that happened only took 2 paragrahps, while the build up of the scene was 4 times longer. (5/10)
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