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Alpha's Need
Author: Tesekian
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(Added on Jun 18, 2005)
(This month 48873 readers) (Total 55738 readers) |
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After her marriage falls apart, Jed returns to play the Games her husband never understood and indulge the part of herself she has been forced to suppress. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
worrierking
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Jun 19, 2005 |
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I was particularly impressed with the implied "backstory" of this piece. That level of detail is often lacking in the stories here.
Though brief, this story contains a great deal of character development, and leaves the reader wanting more.
My only complaint is that the story is coded M/f, while the actual focus is an F/m relationship. That's not my usual choice, but I feel fortunate to have stumbled upon something resmbling literature, among the 2-dimensional "slash, suck & fuck fest" fare that's been showing up on this site lately.
Tesekian, if there's more to this story, or others in this continuity, please post those as well. (9/10)
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