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John? Jon? What's the difference?
Author: akkano
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(Added on Jun 18, 2005)
(This month 68877 readers) (Total 84650 readers) |
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John Smith is a well adjusted, happy, prosperous businessman. In an alternate universe (which is identical to the first universe), his parents name him Jon, instead of John. Because of his being named Jon, his life takes a totally different track in the alternate universe and he becomes involved with BDSM and transgender lifestyles. The change of name is largely responsible for the switching of tracks, if he had been named John, very likely he would not be transgender. The story is in four parts. In part one, John is renamed Jon in the alternate universe. Part one has no BDSM content. Parts two to four are stand alone parts. However, you will get a better appreciation of later parts if you also read part one. Later parts deal with his introduction to BDSM lifestyle and his feminization. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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May 30, 2007 |
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A novel idea with aliens changing the timeline.
The characters are believable, except for John/Jon/Joni. S/he is just a cardboard cutout for a doormat.
When he sees Janice after his 1st night with Minerva, why doesn't he ask for help? After his "escape" why doesn't he go to the cops? After the bikers threaten him, why not go to the cops? If you were abducted and abused for a couple of weeks, would you really not even call your parents because you don't want to disturb them? His reaction is so bizarre that it's just ridiculous.
When he learned from Janice the whole reason for his abduction he didn't even frown a little bit? Didn't even mildly scold her for overreacting? I would have much preferred it if he would have rejected her love at the end.
Also his conditioning is kinda strange. I mean if there is no negative feedback for cumming in any other way than what Minerva wants, why should he have a problem with normal sex? All what she does is give him an additional way of release, not invalidate all the others.
Grammar and spelling are OK, some sex scenes are hot. (6/10)
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CrazyMe
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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A good story through and through. Perhaps the deal with the aliens (or whatever they may be) was a bit strange, but it was very original at any rate.
It was well-written and truly enjoyable. (9/10)
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