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My Horrible Fate
Author: SteveL
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(Added on Jun 18, 2005)
(This month 88343 readers) (Total 134366 readers) |
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Male blackmailed and totally enslaved by wife and friends,NC, forced feminization, punishment, piercings et.al |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
maid babu
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Feb 4, 2009 |
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Absolutely great story. Would like to see a follow up!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
uktrucker100
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Oct 21, 2005 |
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would like to find out how he got to were he is now (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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altho not my genere usualll, this was one real powerfull story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 21, 2005 |
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excellent plot and the story is great also. Maybe a little of how piglet actually became would be in order. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Stylebreak
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Jun 19, 2005 |
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Very packed with humiliation and degradation. Just when you think you've reached the bottom the next sentence tops the suffering of the poor guy.
Very good storyline. Reminds me on the multiple-part-story of David Rand (unfortunatly not on this server, but can be found in the alt.sex.femdom newsgroups e.g. with google)
Hope to see more soon. I especially like to hear more of the little girl, Pia, (I imagine her about 12 years?). Children can have a casual cruelty without recognicing or bothering about the pain they cause.
And I like to see the poor guy more of the luxurities of the others, complaining it is still not good enough. So, while he can't satisfy he's primal needs he has to make unreasonable efforts to help them to achieve a even more pampered life. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jun 19, 2005 |
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This is an extremely powerful but off-putting effort. This reader is reminded of "Pooch's Story", which evoked the same feelings in me. The writing is very good, and flows well despite the length of some of the sentences. However the proofing, or lack thereof, stands out like a sore thumb. How many times can you say "trough" instead of through,or "where" instead of "were"! Anyone who depends on spell check deserves what has happened here. Spell check is not a very good proof reader in case you haven't figured that out yet. Despite my rant on this issue I cannot in all candor penalize what is a very good effort too harshly for what is a correctable problem. However in all honesty this one is too depressing for this reviewer, but should be wildly appealing to those souls with a stronger constitution than mine. My rating does not follow the "rules", but that's the way I operate at times like this. (9/10)
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