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An Inquisitive Federal Agent
Author: Desert Dog
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(Added on Jun 15, 2005)
(This month 115624 readers) (Total 213960 readers) |
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In 'ECSO 12 - An Inquisitive Federal Agent' Aaron Clarke chances upon a Miami-based FBI agent obsessively trying to solve a series of drug-related murders featuring the disappearance of a number of women. Graphic and horrific pictures of two law enforcement agents that supposedly escaped from vicious drug dealers pique the FBI agent's curiosity. ECSO 12 is the story of how this agent't life gets turned upside down after she is tricked into accepting a slaver's help in determining whether the forensic evidence of the case indicated bondage and rape and if it could be used to trace the murderers. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
littleone_
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Aug 3, 2011 |
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This story started out HUGE. However Dessert Dog soon lost his focus, ignored the original central character (Sam) and wound up on tangent, after tangent until the original idea was so diluted it was virtually non-existent. This story could be broken up into two or three very good stories. The author should pick a theme for his stories and work on developing it rather then having one story that rambles all over the place. (5/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Very well executed detective. Only letdown is that at the end of chapter ten, it says "to be continued...", but that was three years ago...
JJ (10/10)
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textfan
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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I enjoy reading this story. Well developed plot, depth of characters is excellent, transition between chapters is superb, litery style is refreshing, an all around great read. It's a challenge to keep up with the hero, but then again, that challenge is what keeps my interest alive. Even more so when I went back and read earlier volumes of this tale. Keep up the great work! (10/10)
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reader01
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Oct 20, 2005 |
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After over six weeks of no serial additions, I still check first for this one. That should tell you how I feel about your well written and lively tale. The essence of a good story teller is developing an unbreakable bond with his audience. You have done it with the whole E.C.S.O. series. I'll be here twice a week looking for the next installment. Thanks for your efforts!
Way to GO! My patience has been rewarded. The story is developing superbly and there are smiles in Mudville this week. Or am I mixing metaphors? I do believe that this story deserves my higest rating. Top Notch work deserves all the credit I can provide. (10/10)
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La Toya
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Great Writing! I happy to see this story still lives on. 9/10 rating
10/9/05 changed my rating from 9 to 10 (10/10)
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castle2001
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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The Dog starts out great again. Keep on. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jul 25, 2005)
- Where is the Dog? Summer Vacation?
- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jul 25, 2005)
- Where is the Dog? Summer Vacation?
- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jul 25, 2005)
- Where is the Dog? Summer Vacation?
- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jul 25, 2005)
- Where is the Dog? Summer Vacation?
- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jul 25, 2005)
- I do not stutter.
- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Sep 18, 2005)
- Good to have dog back.
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| Reviewer:
NistShadow
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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I enjoyed this. Good start. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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great start, i hope you add more as soon as possible (10/10)
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