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Wendy and Her Very Cruel Daddy
Author: asbjorn
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(Added on Jun 7, 2005)
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Online romance turns to physical pain show. Daddy and "little girl" play for keeps. |
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| Reviewer:
Shibari
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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Very erotic. Every woman's fantasy. Well written. I loved it! (10/10)
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Dododecapod
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Jun 30, 2005 |
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Sexy and hot, but it really doesn't live up to the hype of the synopsis as yet. A bit tame, actually. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (Jun 14, 2005)
- so you'll give it a three before it has even developed? I suppose I should wait to post until I am completely finished and it goes to where you need it to go? To tell you the truth, I think perhaps there is no point to posting anything else on this site. Bye now.
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Dododecapod
(Edit) (Jun 16, 2005)
- I said "as yet" and that is what I meant. Nor did I give you a three - I gave you a SEVEN, which frankly is higher than I have given many far more complete works. I can be a very harsh reviewer at times.
You posted your piece to a board with a review function and an active reviewing population. You can only expect to be reviewed. If you are too thin-skinned to accept a POSITVE review, I would hate to think how you would react to a negative one.
- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2005)
- scuse me, three stars. this is the third story I've posted. previously they got ten, nine, eight, and now I get a seven. Seems like the more I work the less I get. Frankly, having read a lot of the stories that get tens, I have to say it's not the literary craft that is getting them their ratings. I have been writing for thirty years and I suppose I had hoped that all that work counted for something. But you are right. Too thin skinned. It's just too tame for someone way out on the edge, like you, with a mathematical pun in your very logon. Do you have stories out there then? And in your experience this is pretty tame? Well, once again, I just put a brief line at the beginning to talk about the nature of the relationship. But clearly relationship isn't part of your evaluation. Or you're just on a higher plane. Well, fifteen thousand hits in three weeks says a lot of people have looked at this. I just wonder why there are no other reviews than this. I'll tell you what, you tell me, since it is so tame, have you bothered to read the parts posted since your original review? And since it is so tame, I would gather that you don't care if I finish it or not? Correct? So, folks, if I don't receive a reason to finish this story, I won't. No one will care and you can all go back to your violence for the sake of violence stories. HO hum, as dodo would say.
- Replied by:
asbjorn
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2005)
- scuse me, three stars. this is the third story I've posted. previously they got ten, nine, eight, and now I get a seven. Seems like the more I work the less I get. Frankly, having read a lot of the stories that get tens, I have to say it's not the literary craft that is getting them their ratings. I have been writing for thirty years and I suppose I had hoped that all that work counted for something. But you are right. Too thin skinned. It's just too tame for someone way out on the edge, like you, with a mathematical pun in your very logon. Do you have stories out there then? And in your experience this is pretty tame? Well, once again, I just put a brief line at the beginning to talk about the nature of the relationship. But clearly relationship isn't part of your evaluation. Or you're just on a higher plane. Well, fifteen thousand hits in three weeks says a lot of people have looked at this. I just wonder why there are no other reviews than this. I'll tell you what, you tell me, since it is so tame, have you bothered to read the parts posted since your original review? And since it is so tame, I would gather that you don't care if I finish it or not? Correct? So, folks, if I don't receive a reason to finish this story, I won't. No one will care and you can all go back to your violence for the sake of violence stories. HO hum, as dodo would say.
- Replied by:
Dododecapod
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2005)
- Actually, I have read your next two pieces, and consider them improvements. In fact, your reply has given me the impetus to do something I had been meaning to - increse my rating for your story. It's still a little tame for me, but your writing has merit.
You're correct that I haven't posted anything under my name. If you think I am hard on people I review, you should see how I am on my own work. I will not post anything I believe I can improve.
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