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The Catch
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 3, 2005)
(This month 12724 readers) (Total 23965 readers) |
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A young black woman dominates a white female store owner. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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ok but other by you are much better (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Jun 6, 2005 |
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All the stories just released and posted by this author were marvelous! As I am a dedicated lesbian woman myself, I too have dreamed anday dreamed of being confronted with, the totally dominated and humiliated by a Black young female! These stories epitomize my own cravings and only wish that he could continue to furnish us with similiar material often! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tbank
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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Much as I'd love to rate this higher, I find it incredibly difficult to read becuase of the lack of quotation marks in the dialogue. It barely takes a second and makes life so much easier for the reader. (4/10)
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Masterdesire
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Some spelling flaws (2). Good storyline. But alittle unbelievable. If she was forced/kidnapped from the store it would have made more sense. Other than that it was quite enjoyable. (7/10)
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