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Indoctrination
Author: Night Owl
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(Added on May 25, 2005)
(This month 319241 readers) (Total 671159 readers) |
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A sordid tale about a woman's descension into the world of BDSM slavery, where she is subsequently tortured, humiliated and forced to perform sexual acts for high society clientèle. This story may be slow at first for some readers, but the content becomes more provocative and intense as it progresses. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
johnlw77
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Nov 8, 2011 |
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This is a truly excellent story. I'm not through with it yet, but can hardly put it down. It is not crude, but it is severe, serious and determined. At the same time it is delicious. The acount of Amber's first stripping after capture is unparalleled in my experience - no violence, but always the threat of it. No crudity but always a slow and relentless pressure determined on its objecive. And all the way along, the shame, the humilition and by it the stripping of so much more than just clothes - it is the loss of all rights, all decisions, all life indeed, to be replaced only by endless obedience andthe necessity of giving pleasure to those who possess her. 10 certainly! (10/10)
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tedrange
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Nov 5, 2011 |
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Phenomenal, one of the best I've ever read. (10/10)
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pains
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Oct 30, 2011 |
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Absolutley love this, was so excited to see a new chapter and am hoping will not have to wait long until the next one (hint hint).
I really want amber to end up with Raven as his slave and just when i thought it was heading that way it steers on a different course, this is certainly one if not the best of the stories i have read on here, in fact i only joined to write this review because i think it deserves to be praised.
thankyou (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Have been following this right from the start, somehow lost track of it, but rekindled myself with the content just the other day, to find a lot more chapters have been added since my last read.
And what a read it is, too.
This is a novel (yes, a novel) whereof you immediately sense the quality, purely by means of the writer's skill to grab your attention and keep it, all the way through.
Because, this here sordid tale has no weak moments. Even when you think the author is veering off the track, after a while you find out that the seemingly wandering off was only done to come back to the main plot with a vengeance.
What is also done very well, is starting with a simple premis (a woman who's been abducted) to, bit by bit, add characters and thicken the plot.
This is a clever move, as the reader is not encumbered by too much detail and folk running around in the story.
Usually, an author has an established plot (with which I don't want to say that Night Owl hadn't) and introduces the whole kaboodle right from paragraph one, leaving the reader very confused trying to make sense of it all.
Night Owl informs us in a gentle way, with little spoonfulls at the time, of where he is going, or rather, where the story is going.
And the story? The story is a real treat and a delight to read. Point.
JJ (10/10)
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subKatie69
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May 1, 2008 |
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this is the first story I have read of your night owl and it has made me want to read the rest of your stories this kind of story has always been a fav of mine and yours is one of the best
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Owl
(Edit) (Jul 24, 2008)
- Many thanks!
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littleone_
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Mar 24, 2008 |
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Excellent character development and plot line. The sex is pure and arousing. I will be reading other stories by Night Owl and hope they are of the same quality. Night Owl, I can tell you are a male but for a guy you do a good job of seeing this type of story from a girls point of view. I'd like see you try to write one entirely from the girls view point. You may be one of few men who could do that. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Owl
(Edit) (Jul 24, 2008)
- I appreciate the review. Actually, I've written a few stories using the girl's p.o.v. Check out Dangerous Games and Against the Post.
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PoppetToday
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Nov 12, 2007 |
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Excellent story. Every chapter I read only makes me want to read more! Keep them coming, please. (10/10)
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Night Owl
(Edit) (Nov 19, 2007)
- Thanks! Working on it.
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StillBehindBlueEyes
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Nov 10, 2007 |
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I just had to come over and tell you what an awsome story you wrote. I can't wait to read some more of your work. If I'd realized you were so good I wouldn't have started an unfinished story, LOL. Now I'm all crazy wanting to read the end.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
stillbehindblueeyes at yahoo dot com
Sbbe (10/10)
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Night Owl
(Edit) (Nov 19, 2007)
- I've been bad about writing replies to my reviews lately, but since you took the time to review all of my stories, I could at least respond. Thanks very much for your praise. Makes it all worth it. I'm working on the next chapter for Indoc right now. I'd get them out quicker if I could, but work and life in general have kept me busy. Thanks for your patience (and to all the other readers, as well). ;-)
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phreak
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Nov 8, 2007 |
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Great story.Waiting for the 14 chapter. (7/10)
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ayeri
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Nov 3, 2007 |
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This is truly an amazing story; please, please, PLEASE continue this. I signed up to BDSM Library just so I could review this to tell you how amazing this is and exactly how hooked you have me on this story. This is truly an amazing story, and you are an amazing writer. Thank you for writing this. (10/10)
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ramses
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Oct 10, 2007 |
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This is one of the best, if not THE best story I read on the site so far. (10/10)
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jade2010
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Sep 23, 2007 |
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Erotic, exciting and enticing. A very very good read. This story is so wonderful that I signed up with BDSM Library in order to save it to my bookshelf! (9/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Sep 21, 2007 |
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Absoloutly incredible, can't wait for more, I have no complaints for this one. (10/10)
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csr
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Sep 14, 2007 |
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Rarely do I rate a story 10/10. Even though this plot has been revisited many times as have the characters, this one kept my interest all the way through. You've done a terrific job. Noticed a couple of small errors, but they may just be typos. Looking forward to more chapters! (10/10)
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Millie
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Jul 28, 2006 |
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I am really enjoying this, and hope there will be more chapters soon. (8/10)
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discreetmanuk
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May 27, 2006 |
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This is a really good read - it's quite wrong to say it is too slow. On the contrary, one of the most erotic things one can read is the careful detiled descriptioin of the long slow adjustment of the captured slave to her fate. And the author's philosophical refelctions aid this process. All that is missing is the remaining chapters! (10/10)
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tragedy3
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May 22, 2006 |
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great read.good details, and the humiliation are wonderful. (8/10)
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slutsteph
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Feb 27, 2006 |
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girl loves the humiliation and the training. girl can hardly wait for the next chapter! (9/10)
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isabeau
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Feb 26, 2006 |
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the first time i visited this library, i read chapter one of this excellent story. at that time i was unaware that these stories are written in installments and was disappointed when it ended without an ending so to speak. well since then i have learned and this story has become one of my very favorites. i love Raven, the character. being a romantic i am hoping he will decide to keep Amber for himself. very well written and more than just another bdsm story , it doesnt dwell on the pain in and of itself. i rated it a ten because it keeps me waiting for more, which to me is the sign of a well written tale written by an excellent author. (10/10)
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chooky_104
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Feb 13, 2006 |
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Love the suspense. The plot may be a seasoned one, but the twists in the telling make it exciting to read. Keep it coming... please. (9/10)
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laursie
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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Loved the story. Loved the humiliation. Very erotic. Can't wait to for the story to continue. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Owl 64
(Edit) (Jan 24, 2006)
- Thanks!
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strict_master
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Dec 29, 2005 |
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Night Owl, you completely rock! This story is wonderful, a very erotic and tasteful exploration of an enslavement. Very well written. For some reason some of the chapters bleed off the page so I missed some of the story...can't figure out how to fix that. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Owl 64
(Edit) (Jan 24, 2006)
- Thanks for the review! As for the bleed problem, I've been trying to fix some issues with how my chapters are displayed. Unfortunately, my text formating doesn't seem to hold whenever I re-post them. I'm not sure if it's a problem on my end, or if it's the host, but I losing my patience.
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mkemse
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Dec 26, 2005 |
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they do not get much better (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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Damn! Now THAT was a great story! I can't wait to read more, please? (10/10)
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rce
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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A good story, though not great. Well written, but the story line is so common the story cannot get a higher score from me than 8. (8/10)
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GaelstormIRA
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Loved it! Can't wait to read more! (10/10)
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BigCat
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Very well done. Maintains suspense which is rare in this genre. (9/10)
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chksng19
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May 27, 2005 |
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A nicely handled tease. Old plot, even old characters, but Amber's exposition was done quite well. The typical school girl, used to following authority figures, etc.
Moving slowly, but due to full descriptions not bad writing. Just one or two little spelling concerns; might double-check them. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Owl 64
(Edit) (Jun 2, 2005)
- Glad you like the story so far. I realize the plot is old, but hopefully, the characters and content will keep it interesting. Spelling has been checked and fixed.
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BDSgirl
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May 26, 2005 |
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i am going to enjoy this story! keep it cumming please. is one of my favourite fantasies, and You are telling it so well. (9/10)
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Night Owl 64
(Edit) (May 31, 2005)
- Many thanks to you and tstruck for your reviews. It's encouraging to hear such positive feedback. More chapters are on the way.
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tstruck
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May 25, 2005 |
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An excellent story. Very interesting, well-paced, and compelling. Very much looking forward to future chapters. (10/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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May 25, 2005 |
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Very nice. The first two chapters are a slow, teasing, er, preAmber, to what one hopes will be an arduous captivity. The author does a fine job building the erotic tension in Chapter II. Looking forward to further adventures with Amber! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Owl 64
(Edit) (May 31, 2005)
- I appreciate the review, and yes, Amber has quite an ordeal in store for her.
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