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The Group House
Author: justin benedict
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(Added on May 25, 2005)
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Kim is the secret slave of Alex...but then her group housemates find out...ooh! |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
bhx1970
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Jun 27, 2005 |
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I just started reading the author's stories, and I have yet to be disappointed. In my opinion, he is one of the best writers of this genre that I have read. I thought this was an original, well-written piece that left me wanting more. The author does a great job of bringing to life the theme of the beautiful heroine, Kim, who hopelessly and almost unwillingly submits to the tantalizing abuse heaped on her by the other characters. He does a great job of describing the humiliating and painful predicaments inflicted upon her. I thought the female interaction with Kim was especially refreshing and would have enjoyed that being more of a focal point. (9/10)
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ms2bused
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May 31, 2005 |
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I was disappointedly surprised in reading this story at how it stressed Alex, the male influence, whereas he had titled the story F/F.
Normally I have found Justins stories to be highly erotic but this was far below his talent level, I believe! (2/10)
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lex ludite
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May 25, 2005 |
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There is plenty about this work that is good; its high degree of heat, a fairly decent writing style and a cast of characters that play their parts dead on. Kim is perhaps the weakest of the batch and for her reward she carries most of the heavy duty punishment that is meted out by any and all of the myriad folks who pass by, over and even through her at times. I don't know how much more abuse our almost unhinged heroine can absorb, but I'm a glutton for punishment, as long as its someone else's. Looking forward to more of the same in future installments. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2005)
- I just finished reading the rest of this story, and despite the nonexistent story codes, I consider this an outstanding piece of work that should find a large audience. I've noticed that authors who present substantial amounts of their work at one time are doomed to low readership, a trend that is quite disturbing in view of the increasing amount of very brief snippets that purport to be writing, but read like finger painting.
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