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Grace's Hard Lessons
Author: Dark Avenger
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(Added on Apr 29, 2005)
(This month 161547 readers) (Total 293538 readers) |
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A young office executive steals from her company and is discovered by a male co-worker who uses this to blackmail her. He humiliates and uses her in the office, tricks her into signing up for a compromising photography shoot, and arranges for her to be subjected to more and more humiliating situations and acts of submission. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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Well written, dark tale of forced submission. Fingerlicking good.
JJ (10/10)
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Nemz
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Jan 2, 2008 |
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I read this story a while ago and have been working on the second part. The story is very well written and interesting. The scenes are well described, yet not tedious for the reader. I can't wait to read more on how she continues to be humiliated. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darkavenger
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2008)
- Thank you Nemz. Grace's story continues in "Grace's Hard Lessons II" (also known as Grace's Very Hard Lessons), so I hope the second volume keeps you interested and coming back for more. (Am submitting GVHL chapter 25 today for publishing).
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ramses
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Sep 16, 2006 |
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simply great. The description of the girl's feelings as she gets humiliated is excellent. (10/10)
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eloise25
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Jun 12, 2006 |
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really liked it. Please add more. (9/10)
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ThisGirl
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Apr 18, 2006 |
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Definitely could compete with published authors of this genre. This story's got nuances wrapped in subtleties wrapped in undercurrents of the sensuality of d/s, but never sacrifices graphic details when necessary and desired by the reader. Every part of me hungers with anticipation for more. (10/10)
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darkavenger
(Edit) (Apr 22, 2006)
- Thank you very much for the lavish praise. The story continues in the sequel "Grace's Very Hard Lessons".
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bingb
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Apr 17, 2006 |
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A really horny story. (10/10)
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rilawild
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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Excellent, well written story with a great plot. Grace's slide in submission and slavery keeps the reader wanting more, wanting to see her slip further and further into trouble and beyhond the point of no return.
It's not "wham bam, thankyou ma'am"; the subtly makes it much more exciting - like a partially dressed woman is more exciting than a completely naked one. (10/10)
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darkavenger
(Edit) (Sep 3, 2005)
- Thank you all for the positive comments. Part 5 has been updated with a new chapter (chp 15) on Sep 2nd. This will be followed very soon by Part 6 with the finale.
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BigCat
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Jul 21, 2005 |
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Really a fine piece of writing, depicting well Grace's inner torment and subtle slide into more humiliating situations. Story is actually quite reasonable in that it's not over the top. Events could actually have taken place. Really well done. Loom forward to more of this work. Thanks. (10/10)
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davine
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Jun 25, 2005 |
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Just love the humiliation. probably more so than the sucks and fucks. Perhaps some piercings and more outlandish clothing in public would be nice. (10/10)
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renko
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Jun 22, 2005 |
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Nice story... I like the way Grace is slowly coming to accept her place a slut... Like to see her get really inti the depraved stuff.. (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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This is a wonderful story - I like how the public humiliation is not over the top, and as such, can keep going and going as she struggled to maintain some facade of dignity. (10/10)
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PallMall
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May 14, 2005 |
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I really love your stories of deep humiliation! This is another excellent example - pls make this a long one with lots of humiliating exposure and degrading usage of Grace by tons of strangers (or even worse? :)...canīt wait to see more... :) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darkavenger
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2005)
- Thank you. There is certainly more in store for Grace, and it will get worse for her. But if you do have any plot requests, send me an email. By the way, chapter 11 has just been added to Part 4 on May 17.
DA - Chapter 12 has been added to Part 4 on 1 June
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Abe Froman
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May 4, 2005 |
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I enjoyed it quite a bit, really liking the way Grace is just getting herself deeper and deeper. Plus, there seems to be the start of a larger, overall plan to humiliate her fully. Can't wait to read more and more. (9/10)
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darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- After the events of chapter 9, one can imagine Royston, Nakamori and Shih in a cafe, negotiating who owns her now. Royston wants to take her home that weekend, tie her on his bed, spreadeagled with all three holes available for his use all weekend. Nakamori is toying with the idea of bringing her to a private bdsm party as his obedient pet, while Shih has plans to entertain some Japanese clients who are in town. Thanks for the review.
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RhondaLee
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May 4, 2005 |
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This is a very well written story. Men or women being toy with in an office environment is always fascinating. As I was reading the story, I can imagine a future scene that Grace has to crawl around in public to different office desks to give heads. (9/10)
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darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- Thank you for your comments. Certainly if Grace does not follow Royston's instructions in the office to his satisfaction, this could well be a punishment.
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chksng19
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May 4, 2005 |
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Nicely crafted story, plenty of humiliation. Looking forward to more of her debt repayment! (9/10)
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darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- Thank you. In chapter 11, it would be apparent how much more debt Grace has to repay .. but is she willing to accept what it takes? Please stay tuned for more chapters.
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stormbringer
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May 3, 2005 |
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interesting read, i enjoyed her character and body, would like to read more (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- She is a feisty little sexy thing, isn't she. Any particular aspects of her body you love? Thanks for the feedback.
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| Reviewer:
Ciprian
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May 2, 2005 |
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A very good humiliation / blackmail story, my favorite topic. Please keep going. (10/10)
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darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- Thank you for the full score given.
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| Reviewer:
SirOhNo
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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Good story flow and scenario, my favorite topic, finger fucking her mouth a nice touch, well written, can't wait for rest of story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- Thank you very much for the high rating. If we're lucky, she might get finger-fucked elsewhere.
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newwmember
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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Well, really a great story so far, something like James Dawson's style in the approach of the context! Pls. keep going (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- James Dawson's stories are one of my favorites too. Unfortunately he seems to have stopped writing, and there were a few stories unfinished.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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please keep adding to this, it is great so far (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- I see you have reviewed plenty of stories, so to get the top rating from you is very much a compliment. Thanks.
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slutsteph
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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What a great beginning! Well written. Hot. i can feel the humiliation Grace is experiencing. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darkavenger
(Edit) (May 20, 2005)
- girl, I know you do. thanks
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