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The Perishable Heart
Author: damselsthrall
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(Added on Apr 19, 2005)
(This month 32395 readers) (Total 51109 readers) |
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Who was this young dominant beauty who stole my heart in aisle nine? My heart pines for her. My cock throbs for her. Does either organ stand a chance? |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
hepburn
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May 30, 2008 |
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I really liked to read this story.
Unfortunately the end was a little bit to freaky for my taste! (8/10)
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duchifat
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May 3, 2005 |
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i love the story.Please tell us more. (10/10)
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makito
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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Excellent work. I believe the author's slightly understated style adds to the power of this story to excite. Anybody reading this story would love to meet this young lady. I really appreciate this work and hope the author will continue. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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The initital section of this story was excellent, but what has followed is a bit much, even for a personal fantasy. I realize that there are many readers who will be attracted to this effort, but it just doesn't give me any warm feelings about how this one will play out. It doesn't help matters that Annabeth and her victim are straight out of central casting.In my mind, it already has shot its bolt. In passing I am envious of those authors who have the capability of coming up with eye catching titles, this one is right up there as far as this reader is concerned. (5/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 24, 2005 |
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Excellent beginning to a possible great saga. (7/10)
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mystymason
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Apr 24, 2005 |
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Very sweet can be very dangerous. This author does a good job of following a man who makes the mistake of not only thinking with his lust and then acting on it. (7/10)
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ropebinder
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Apr 21, 2005 |
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I enjoyed this story. It was a little far-fetched, especially with the author portraying it as non-fiction, but the grammar and style were affective. More importantly, the author convinced me that he could feel this way, which is highly erotic. Nothing sexual happens, which is an unfortunate trend in Internet fiction, but the storyline is fun and compelling. (7/10)
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La Toya
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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This is not what I look for in a story, but! It was well done and men are good for.............. (6/10)
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