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My King And Me
Author: ella
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(Added on Apr 16, 2005)
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A young woman agrees to become her lover's slave. As she is subjected to humiliation and punishment, she feels that her love for her king gets deeper and deeper... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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Another story of submission. A good thing that this one is set apart due to the personal feel, thanks to ella not just writing stuff down, but tapping into some of her experiences.
Endearing and beautiful, thought-provoking even.
Very nice.
JJ (10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 25, 2008 |
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needs some work but a great idea and concept this is how it all starts out (9/10)
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StrangeGirl
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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Brilliant story, I really enjoyed it.. Would love to read more. Still have one question - is your story based on the true events or thats only your imagination? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ella
(Edit) (Apr 3, 2006)
- This story is indeed based on true events. That is why it has so many details of domestic character - food, cooking... It comes naturally when I write. I also tried to be as close to reality as possible in my description of main characters - the woman is Russian, her King is from Central America, I hope I described them accurately.
But of course being the author of the story I took the liberty of embellishing it with episodes and events that are the product of my fantasy.
The next chapter will be coming soon. I am very happy that you enjoyed the story and I thank you for your kind review.
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| Reviewer:
ron8nl
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Jul 15, 2005 |
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No real writer in here, but I like the D/s (7/10)
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pejanon
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Jul 6, 2005 |
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Very nice 'sweet submission' piece. Good pacing, really juicy.
Background information and descriptions are threaded IN the story, not just dropped in large indigestible lumps. Each 'chapter' is also a stand-alone story, building up the whole which will, hopefully, emerge.
I'd love to read more.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jul 5, 2005 |
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Ella, You did a great job writing the story. I would love to know if there will be more.
7/5/05
Good Writing! Increased rating from 8 to 9 (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ella
(Edit) (Apr 17, 2005)
- Thank you so much for your encouraging words. This is the first time writing a story for me, and especially sharing those intimate things. As far as continuation, I will have to wait and see what happens, since the story is based on reality. I will try not to disappoint you though...
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wodan77
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Jul 4, 2005 |
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I am blown away by this story! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ella
(Edit) (Jul 5, 2005)
- That is an amazing comment. Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Wow, every man's (well most men's) wet dream chiseled up there on the monitor.
We should all be so lucky. Now if you could just learn the tenses of kneel, knelt and Lay laid you'd have perfection. I'm sure that's what your goal is right… For Him.
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- Replied by:
ella
(Edit) (Apr 17, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind review. I will try to pay more attention to grammar in the future - English is not my first language, you see... But I guess that is not an exuse... Thank you again.
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