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Emma's New World
Author: emma_sub
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(Added on Apr 16, 2005)
(This month 84901 readers) (Total 102566 readers) |
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A story of a girls slow and emotional transition from vanilla into the world of submission. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 10, 2009 |
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Can't add much to what maratsade and rilawild have said, as I fully agree with their points. Another excellent entry by emma_sub!
JJ (10/10)
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rilawild
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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I loved this story. The writing and pacing were excellent. The whole premise was well handled and I really liked the way that Emma was slowly lead to the final scene of her submission. I'd love to know what happened next, but I guess that that is what fantasies are for. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
maratsade
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May 10, 2005 |
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I haven't read the author's work since the delicious lesbian pieces she did earlier - which inspired me to have a go at composition myself. So far, by her standards, I'm not much good, though improving, I hope.
Anyway, trying has made me realise all the more what a star this author is.
I think that chapter 1 of the story is really excellent. The psychology is so good, and the author accomplishes that first but difficult principle, 'showing not telling'.
As before, very erotic, and in a movingly feminine way, if I may be sexist. For a while I wasn't sure whether the love object was male or female, and she kept me guessing until his cock was produced. I liked that.
Some time ago, I mentioned her work to a publisher. I would like to know if anything came of this.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
emma_sub
(Edit) (May 10, 2005)
- i am so grateful for Your comments and in Your review. Thank You. i hope the story made You as hard as it made me wet writing it.
yours
m
xxx
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| Reviewer:
drayman
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Apr 18, 2005 |
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Very well written, the author's vivid descriptive ability is excellent, whilst she opens the door to her inner secrets. I suspect the writer has experienced emotional highs in her search to fulfill her deepest desires. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
emma_sub
(Edit) (May 10, 2005)
- i am so grateful for Your comments and in Your review. Thank You. i hope the story made You as hard as it made me wet writing it.
yours
m
xxx
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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Very nice writing. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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A truly rewarding glimpse into the mind of a true submissive. Keep up the good work! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
emma_sub
(Edit) (May 10, 2005)
- i am so grateful for Your comments and in Your review. Thank You. i hope the story made You as hard as it made me wet writing it.
yours
m
xxx
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Excellent, consistant story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
emma_sub
(Edit) (May 10, 2005)
- i am so grateful for Your comments and in Your review. Thank You. i hope the story made You as hard as it made me wet writing it.
yours
m
xxx
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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wish you had made it NC but still a good read (7/10)
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