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Helpless
Author: tru2formuk
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(Added on Apr 13, 2005)
(This month 16918 readers) (Total 30201 readers) |
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Young student seduces then humiliates teacher. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 10, 2007 |
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i hope the author plans more, does need some editing and proofing, but a good start anyway
1 otherthing, in your codes it says M/f but in the story the female teacher is in charge (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ropebinder
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Apr 21, 2005 |
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As I read this story, my opinion went from "this is interesting" to "just another boring hack job." The story begins with a fantasy that all men enjoy, student dominates professor. Unfortunately, the piece deteriorates rapidly with the for-some-reason-requirement that male authors provide us with a detailed image of their female fantasy, height, hair color, body image, outfit, etc. I wish more writers would let readers create their own image. The author lost me when in one moment the teacher and student are sitting down to review her homework and in the next paragraph she places his hand on her pussy. This story was a big YAWN. Sorry. (4/10)
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lex ludite
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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I hope that if this story continues, the author will do a better job of editing than what has been presented here. On a scale of ten it rates possibly a five for editing. Bad editing means distractions for the reader, which detracts from the enjoyment of the story. The plot is certainly not novel nor are the characters. The teacher is a spineless wimp, who probably deserves and likely enjoys all the humiliation that the student dishes out to him, nothing wrong with that. Hopefully if this continues the author will provide a bit more than humiliation and degradation by the numbers. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Eden's Girl
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- I liked this story, although I do agree with Lex. It needs some fine-tuning. Some good ideas in there, though - looking forwards to a second part :)
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