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Blackmailing Julie
Author: TaskMaster
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(Added on Apr 1, 2005)
(This month 156331 readers) (Total 253346 readers) |
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A young woman is blackmailed by her sadistic neighbour, who slowly turns her into his personal sex slave. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
ellegirl232
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Jun 22, 2010 |
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xx (1/10)
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- Replied by:
TaskM
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2005)
- Thank you. Your feedback is very encouraging. For sure, the setup is unrealistic, but plausible enough for the purposes, I think... no alien tentacle attacks in this one!
- Replied by:
ellegirl232
(Edit) (Jun 22, 2010)
- xx
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joshjg
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Feb 17, 2009 |
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Fantastic, wish there was more though. (8/10)
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Grey0
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Feb 11, 2008 |
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The continuing degradation of the girl was very erotic. I loved seeing her crumble.
Maybe the next direction would be for her to be outside where she might be seen by others
(8/10)
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dreampiggy
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Mar 14, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed this story. The humiliation was simply wonderful and a huge turn on. Did not feel it was cruel at all. (9/10)
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wodan77
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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Well written, great content, love the humiliation - M/f asslicking was a big turn on. I hope there are more parts to come! (9/10)
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MasterRJ
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Apr 11, 2005 |
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Slap an ending on this baby and it gets up to 9 (7/10)
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- Replied by:
TaskM
(Edit) (Apr 11, 2005)
- Um, yes, this story is not done. More parts are coming.
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TaskM
(Edit) (Apr 11, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
spicym
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Apr 10, 2005 |
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WONDERFUL,GREAT,VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!!!!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TaskM
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2005)
- Thanks! Glad you enjoy it.
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La Toya
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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This story is worth reading. I would like to see were it goes before scoreing it with a higher.
4/7/05
its getting better (8/10)
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zephyr
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Apr 5, 2005 |
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Great story that you will want to read more of. Now usually I would like to read about characters that have been more thoroughly described in the story. This one seems to do well enough for me even without it as I find myself wanting to be in her shoes from time at one point in the story or another. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TaskM
(Edit) (Apr 5, 2005)
- Thank you, Zephyr. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm trying to integrate a bit more "character development" into the next parts, but I always get distracted by the mean action ;) Take care.
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Dee Driscoll
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Apr 5, 2005 |
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An enjoyable read, for sure. Very clear style, good pace, believable (if not extremely original) premise... It is hard not to feel for the sub and sometimes grin along with the Dom. What I'd like to see is a little more flesh on their skeletons, in terms of motivation/ reaction/ psychology. I am aware thatthis is porn, but it's a well written porn and deepening the characters can only help the matters in my opinion. Also a more thorough proofreading would have erradicated the few typos I have found slightly annoying. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TaskM
(Edit) (Apr 5, 2005)
- Thank you for your helpful comments. Those are all good points. I have submitted a revised version of Part I that fixes quite a few typos I came across after the fact.
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chksng19
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Apr 5, 2005 |
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A good start. How about a turnabout? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
subgeoff
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Apr 4, 2005 |
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I really like this story, I hope there will be more chapters! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TaskM
(Edit) (Apr 5, 2005)
- Since quite a few people seem to enjoy this story, I have already written an additional part, and it has been submitted. Look for it in one of the next few updates... thanks!
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jeanne
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Apr 4, 2005 |
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A very good rendition of an old classic. Very nice innovations - toothpicks, screwdrivers - maybe not developed enough!
Will there be a sequel, hopefully several???
My only reservation is that the state of the punished girl's pussy is not clarified - I would have expected her to be a constant order to shave her pussy, as a sign of submission! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TaskM
(Edit) (Apr 4, 2005)
- Thanks for your feedback, jeanne. Some punishments I developed fully, while others I just hint at and leave to the reader's imagination. I have considered ye olde pussy shaving requirement; perhaps for another part. I don't want to use up all the cliches in Part I, do I? ;)
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bisarah
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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damn ... that was one mean guy!!! but the story was well paced and well put together ... will you continue it? i'd like to see how mean he will get! (8/10)
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Mad Lews
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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It's an interesting story with a believable line. Your perpetrator has an imaginative nasty streak that will set your average victim all aquiver. Do hope you have more to come. (7/10)
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Dionysusmas
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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I really like this story. I only wish it was longer. Love the humiliation aspects. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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waiting for more, hope it is real soon (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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Good story. I always enjoy a good case of blackmail. The story had a nice even pace and keep me interested. (7/10)
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