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Sarah's Smile
Author: DionysusMas
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(Added on Mar 29, 2005)
(This month 84324 readers) (Total 125977 readers) |
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Sarah was a dutiful wife and business woman who's life was taken over by two ill-tempered and violent men. Seemingly at her husband's request the men kidnap and abuse poor Sarah for their own amusement. They take her to a remote cabin and through pain and humiliation turn her into a slave. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Harsh, ruthless, sadistic and vile, but it works wonderfully.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Feb 2, 2007 |
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Wow, very rough sex. Could be a bit more detailed, like describing she was forced to be a toilet for the 1st time. The story is missing a bestiality code. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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Good story. There is something missing, but I just can put my finger on what it is.
4/28/05 Changed my review to a 10. I was on some heavy meds from a car accident, now that I am off the meds all I can say is great job, and to bad the rating scale goes only to 10 (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Dionysusmas
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2005)
- Thanks La Toya, let me know what's missing when you figure it out. I had thought of continuing the story but I've already started a new one.
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| Reviewer:
carrie
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Apr 1, 2005 |
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I have to give this story an excellent review! Not once did the victim enjoy her humiliation which is so annoying when I read a story. The author obviously knows how to humiliate women and doesn't put the fake bullshit where suddenly the woman is having an orgasm from being raped and humiliated.
If you are into humiliating women and not into the fake crap that makes you feel ok by her enjoying it to make you feel ok this is the story for you.
What I enjoyed most about this story is the realism of being realistic. I give a big plus to the humiliation of farting in her mouth, uncleaniness of the rapists, and their and her body inperfections.
If I were to add to this story it would include videotaping her humiliation and posting it on the internet. I'd also include those dogs the author mentioned in the beginning of the story. Humiliation is the key! :) Kudo's to the author! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 30, 2005 |
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yikes!!!! those were two mean dudes. you did a good job in your writing--there may have been typos, but i was too transfixed to see them. will you continue?? (9/10)
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mike uk reader
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Mar 30, 2005 |
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My Kind Of Fiction From A Great New Author To
The BDSM Library.
Top Rating From Me- LET'S HAVE ANOTHER STORY SOON. 10/10 (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 30, 2005 |
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My type of everything (10/10)
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