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He's Mine
Author: Couture
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(Added on Mar 26, 2005)
(This month 14194 readers) (Total 31604 readers) |
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She get's what she wants from her friend's prom date. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Apr 1, 2005 |
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I liked this story a lot (it should probably be an 8, but I'm compensating for some bozos with no taste by giving it a 10). Even without a lot of explicit sex, it still was a turn-on just by virtue of the power struggle it described. (10/10)
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mystymason
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Mar 31, 2005 |
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Nicely done. And as an added bonus to f/m fans, both of the women were bitches (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jackkat
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Mar 30, 2005 |
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Nice control story with a super humiliation scene for the young man when his date finds out.The young man seems helpless in the hands of the masturbatrix (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
michaelalexande
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Mar 29, 2005 |
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I thought this tale was kind of fun. It had a good plot, and for me, interesting characters. I remember being somewhat of a wimp in high school myself. Where was this girl when I was a teenager?
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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not a big fan of Femdon, and you usuaul are a constant 10 (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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The story could have been better and the catorgories could have been chosen better. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
S_Couture
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2005)
- Thanks needledick. Maybe next time you can explain how to chose the right catORgories.
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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A good short story. We'd like to see if it will be expanded upon. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 27, 2005 |
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your writing is not good. you have too fast of a pace and quite frankly, i had no clue why anyone was doing anything. you need to flesh out your characters and retry this. i think the idea behind the story might be good. (2/10)
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