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Soccer Mom
Author: Couture
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(Added on Mar 26, 2005)
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A surburban housewife is enslaved by another woman. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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A very good read from a wickedly inventive (i am not sure if i can ever have mustard again) writer. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 16, 2010 |
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Another one of those perfect shorts. Perfect, because, in the short space of a 15Kb text, Couture manages what lots of other authors never even achieve in a 500-page novel: giving the reader the feeling he actually witnessed something, by presenting that reader with three-dimensional characters, comprehensible motivations and a plausible outcome.
Great stuff and top shelf material.
Well done, Couture.
JJ (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 6, 2008 |
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you are BACK :), hope you plan to ad more very soon
Need to make it what is is a 10 (10/10)
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sissychar
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Jul 14, 2007 |
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So very durty (10/10)
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raynestorm
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Apr 4, 2006 |
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Please finish this erotic story. It has me on the edge.
9/10 (9/10)
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Borborad
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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I absolutely loved this one, I'm curious what happens next :-) (10/10)
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pinto
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May 13, 2005 |
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Love the story. Great job. I also wish the wife would have struggled a bit more to hid what she really wanted. But I can't wait to see where it goes. (10/10)
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Yoru
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Apr 5, 2005 |
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very enjoyable. hope there will be more.
just 9 out of 10 because the housewifes struggle is too short. (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 4, 2005 |
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Excewllent story. Great plot and the story telling is awesome. (9/10)
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sarahbunnyuk
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Apr 4, 2005 |
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I really enjoyed this story, and thought the ending was deliciously kinky, with the housewife getting dressed up in her wedding dress for the older woman to play with! (8/10)
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jackkat
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Mar 30, 2005 |
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Thought the story was well written. Enjoyed the submissive nature of the young housewife and the helpless feeling she must have had as she stood there paralyzed by the older woman. (9/10)
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La Toya
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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Good fast moving story. I hope there will be more to come. (8/10)
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jbowler65
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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Very good and fast paced. Looking forward to more of your work. (8/10)
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michaelalexande
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Mar 27, 2005 |
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I think the most important quality that should be emphasized here is the author's ability to reproduce the feelings of humiliation..i.e the recurring references to the husband and kids. Emotion carried this story...not props or environment. An excellent little story...with lots of opportunity for a sequel. (9/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 27, 2005 |
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i thought this story was quite well-written, even with the fast pace of it. I am looking forward to the next part! (8/10)
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allstar
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Mar 26, 2005 |
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This viginette suffers a little from the speed with which Sara submits to her fate (should there be a blackmail code there? Or a NC over the future of the mustard bottle?), and it's a bit formula-driven, but it's a hot little ride.
As always, Couture writes with an casual grace that must have thousands of readers deceived into thinking that writing erotica is easy. (8/10)
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