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Fine Print
Author: AlwaysCocked
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(Added on Mar 26, 2005)
(This month 34438 readers) (Total 77809 readers) |
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A cautionary tale about how you should never trust the government, and should always read the fine print before you sign anything. The first part is more kink than sex. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
CoughDrop
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Oct 10, 2007 |
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Well rounded and excellently written. If this story's themes are your thing, you'll be throughly entertained and thrilled! (10/10)
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cymbidia
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Jan 6, 2006 |
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Excellent imagery. Creative plot. Great writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. (9/10)
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BDSgirl
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Aug 29, 2005 |
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well, i like bestiality, and i like sci-fi, so you had it covered! i felt you handled it quite well for the lengthof the story, you obviously didnt want to get bogged down, so cut out lots of boring bits - like gestation. you really have a twisted mind! but hey! i like the way it twists. (8/10)
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sunburststrat
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Apr 6, 2005 |
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Now this is creative! It is a very interesting read, and I found it erotic in a pretty odd & twisted way. (8/10)
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jenny_sub
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Apr 1, 2005 |
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Aside from the transition that everyone talks about this was a very good story. I love beastial aspects in stories and this one was *very* exciting for me. The modification parts were also intriguing. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Mar 29, 2005 |
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Well I do like SciFi and you have a great little story here. Lot's of imagination and thought deployed here. Your only problem seems to be losing some of your audience when you do transitions. Maybe add a few more cues to keep the readers on top of the situation. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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do not care for Sci-Fi, but there is always an exception to most reules, i will be intrested to see where you go from here and will adjust my review accordingly (7/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 26, 2005 |
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not a big fan of the science fiction genre, but this story was quite well written and extremely interesting. the only suggestion i would make is that a notation or something between when the girls were in the registration office and when they were in space would have been nice. it took me a few seconds to catch on. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Mar 26, 2005 |
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The story is not bad. The writer lost me for a second, as the story just jumps, from earth to space. There was nothing to say why this happened.
As I said, its not a bad story, and worth the read (6/10)
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