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The DA's New Job
Author: Evil Misstress
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(Added on Mar 15, 2005)
(This month 54048 readers) (Total 70834 readers) |
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A young up and coming DA gets lost in the wrong side of town and is taken in by a street whore, who drugs her and takes her identity and give her the whores life. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Mar 17, 2005 |
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You have some (is Fun the right word?) ideas and a story line you can make work but I have to agree with Alex( shudder) It reads more like a narration than a story. Try throwing some quotes in and get your characters talking and interacting with each other. You could make it a lot more ( Fun) believable (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Mar 16, 2005 |
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This story has a number of problems—spelling errors, missing punctuation and changes in tense make it difficult to read. I think, too, it tends to read more like a narration than a story.
I felt the concept was really a long stretch for anyone’s imagination. I mean this really couldn't happen in a month of Sundays, could it?
On the up side, Kate and Penny are two of my favourite names.
I like that this author is giving something a little different a go, but I really feel she would benefit from finding someone to edit and look over her work. Like the rating says—it’s ok—it shows some promise, but the author could (certainly) improve it.
(5/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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Excellent story and great beginning. I hope to read more about the old DA and new DA. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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please add more ; i realy enjoyed it waiting to see what happens to the DA next (8/10)
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Jens777
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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quite nice (6/10)
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