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The Naked Swordswoman
Author: Melanie Kay
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(Added on Mar 4, 2005)
(This month 51937 readers) (Total 59506 readers) |
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A young bi girl gets an older woman into bondage and uses a sword to give them both an orgasm. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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Like Dodo said, a well written, fun, erotic romantic story.
Good characterizations and solid writing make for an interesting short.
JJ (9/10)
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Dododecapod
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Mar 5, 2005 |
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This is a little lighter than I usually go for, but I'm glad I did. It's erotic, fun, and romantic.
I could wish for it to be a little harder - a more intimate description of the shower, perhaps. But the swordplay and sex mix was near perfect, and your writing is excellent. I think I'll check for other works under your name. (9/10)
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