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Findings Kept
Author: silvereyes
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(Added on Feb 26, 2005)
(This month 70465 readers) (Total 83222 readers) |
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A once lost Athena stumbles in to the arms of Mistress Gillian only to find her true place. But of course, nothing in this world is free. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Feb 27, 2005 |
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Good start, but a small problem I had was with the names of the character be almost the same. (7/10)
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Mad Lews
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Feb 26, 2005 |
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A nice beginning, The story flows smoothly and is well paced. The author knows how to leave us in suspense ( ok that was a pun) . I have to agree with Ruby though the similar names gets a little confusing until they both are deep into their roles and then it's easy to tell them apart. Was that intentional? (8/10)
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Ruby
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Feb 26, 2005 |
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I liked the story concept. The main character names both started with an A and this was confusing. Some great visuals. Am looking forward to see where you take this and what story codes are added. -- Chapters 1-3 (7/10)
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