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Jailed
Author: Evil Misstress
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(Added on Feb 22, 2005)
(This month 61498 readers) (Total 89796 readers) |
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A young female police Officer is made swap places with another female young prisoner with their roles reversed. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 12, 2008 |
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enjoyable to read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 4, 2005 |
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The were parts of the story that semed like run on sentence after run on sentence. Other then that the story and plot were great. Hope to read future chapters. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Feb 24, 2005 |
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I can't believe anyone would give this more than a 3! Impossible to read; implausable plot and improbable characters. A complete waste of time, possibly talent and space. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Feb 24, 2005 |
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Good premise, but hard to read. Please edit and add paragraphs. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 24, 2005 |
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A fairly old plot, but some new ideas.
There are these wonderful things called paragraphs. They help seperate which person is speaking. They keep ideas seperate. They make the story easier to read. And this story needs them. Badly (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Feb 23, 2005 |
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Excellently written and a very sensual, and erotic tale! Oh, how I envied the originalofficer, Michelle! Why couldn't something like this happen to me! DRATS!
A new and avid fan,
neenee
(JaneenMarie O'Brien) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
vickytv
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Feb 22, 2005 |
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loved this story, can't wait for the next part!!! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Feb 22, 2005 |
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The premise is okay, though there are some big
implausibilities in the plot. But the story is
badly spelled and basically ungrammatical. In
particular, the authors should become
acquainted with the use of quotation marks.
Running narration and dialogue together,
willy-nilly, in a paragraph is hard to forgive.
It might well deserve a better rating if it
were edited properly. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
NiceMaster
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Feb 22, 2005 |
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Very wild imagination and somehow new consept ! (8/10)
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