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Black Mansion
Author: John Galt
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(Added on Feb 22, 2005)
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Wealthy and with a lot of time on his hands, Jospeh Drake decides to create a place where fantasies can be lived out. The Black Mansion. This is the story about the foundation of the mansion, of how it begun and was created. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Maitre1962
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Nov 5, 2007 |
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Nice Story!
It would be a good idea though,if it was edited by someone whose english was a little better.
It is rather obvious,that english is NOT your primary language.
English is not my primary language either.Therefor,I feel justified to make this observation.
Again, nice story!
Congrats! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 22, 2005 |
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very well done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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a great beginning ... i am looking forward to more. The writing is very good, but you do have a couple of typos ... {{whispers}} spellcheck! (9/10)
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LyNX.ThE
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Mar 10, 2005 |
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Cant wait for more. Keep em coming.
Extremely well written and good attention to detail. (9/10)
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Lord Douche
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Mar 4, 2005 |
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Keep the chapters coming, I like it so far :) (9/10)
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La Toya
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Feb 24, 2005 |
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This was a great and some what true to live start to the story. I look forward to more chapters. (9/10)
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csr
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Feb 24, 2005 |
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A very nice start--promising! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (9/10)
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