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The Wager
Author: Sailor 861
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(Added on Feb 18, 2005)
(This month 10953 readers) (Total 23860 readers) |
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SuperBowl Sunday turns into a rough-and-tumble bondage encounter for young Dawn Bright, of Philadelphia, last year. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 21, 2005 |
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A great start to a story with potential. Some concerns with details. Superbowl in Philly starts at 5PM, not 2. Sun would be long down by 5:30. She is into bondage, but doesn't recognize a ball-gag? Somewhat confusing. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Feb 21, 2005)
- Thanks for your comments, chksng19, and your sharp eye to details I had overlooked in my haste to produce this story last year on short notice.
I appreciate your comments and will cast a sharper eye to the screen next time when the composing mood hits.
Sincerely,
Sailor
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Feb 20, 2005 |
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Nice plot, great bondage. Needs a bit of work on character consistancy in thoughts and actions. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Feb 21, 2005)
- Thanks for your comments, Ruby, and your email. I replied to your mail today. With every best wish,
Sailor
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 20, 2005 |
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Hope you have more to cum, . really enjoyed the story (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Feb 21, 2005)
- I am so glad you enjoyed The Wager, mkemse; I have posted several other stories recently at the library and I direct your attention to them.
Thanks for writing.
Sincerely,
Sailor
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 19, 2005 |
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Nice story, a little cute at times but very enjoyable. One small point, If you name your character after the sunrise you should be consistent in capitalizing her name. Keep up the great stories. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2005)
- Thanks for your kind comments, Mad Lews. I will sharpen my eyeballs for the capitalizations of my characters' (Yes, it should be Dawn Bright) names in my next story, in which I hope to plumb the eerie depths of permanent bondage (applied to the limbs of lissome ladies languishing longingly in the lands of BDSM). ;-)
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