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Kelly's Conversion
Author: Not My Story
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(Added on Feb 12, 2005)
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He had known her since the fourth grade, as her fate would have it he met her again later in life and made her his own. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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Due to the narrative, "Kelly's Conversion" seems too distant and cold, preventing the reader (at least myself) from connecting with the characters, especially Kelly.
And --as so often is the case-- there's no real 'conversion' as Kelly seems to come from that ever so popular mold which spawns prefabricated chikadees with masochistic tendencies, to which must be given in the minute an authoritive figure steps into the frame.
Too bad, as this story could have been so much nicer.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slo18
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Mar 4, 2005 |
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I really would love to read more of this story the charicters' personality really shines though and the details are fantastic (9/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 13, 2005 |
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i hope you plan to add more, i really like the way you detailed the parts posted so far (9/10)
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