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Second Place
Author: Terri Madison
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(Added on Jul 14, 2000)
(This month 201640 readers) (Total 263942 readers) |
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Two girls competed with each other for almost everything. Finally the second-place fought back and turned the first-place a docile slave. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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TANK1
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Sep 12, 2012 |
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Extremely exciting story.Well written. (10/10)
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5909981
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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wonderful story the plot was really do suggest if u have read any similar (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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One of the better F/F humiliation stories around. Can't add anything else, really.
JJ (10/10)
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Deathnote
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Aug 24, 2008 |
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Started reading this over at Stray Thoughts, but it ended at chapter 12. Was really worried about how it'd end. In fact, I felt sorry for Terri since her wedding ring was taken. Weird (o_O").
REALLY loved the revenge ending. B1tch had it coming. ^_^ (9/10)
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BigCat
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Sep 18, 2005 |
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A wild over-the-top romp with intense humiliation. Well done F/f revenge tale. (10/10)
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Zubisco
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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A very intense rivalry ends up in a non-consensual domme/sub type situation. The humiliation and degradation of Terri is superb, the way it is layered on chapter after chapter. (10/10)
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Brooking
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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Nice plot (8/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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YES!!!
love the volleyball game at the beach, also the workout part at the health club (10/10)
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kokkentor
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Dec 3, 2001 |
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I wish i was Terri if i was born woman *s* The story has a very good plot from beginning. (9/10)
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deviant
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May 1, 2001 |
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A superb story. The humiliation is just terrific. I only wish that there were more stories out there like this. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jorge Garcia |
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Feb 21, 2001 |
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Simply great...and promising of more to cum (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
William |
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Nov 7, 2000 |
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Very exciting.Author Terri Madison cleverly keeps the humiliation at a fever pitch. (9/10)
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PrissySPrincess |
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Nov 2, 2000 |
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I enjoyed the story. In the beginning, I was confused as to who was 1st place and who was 2nd place. (my fault-just the way I read stories)
MInd you it did not make me horny at all. But I LOVE the revenge part!!!!! To Darn Good. Thumbs up!!!! Make the B pay@!!!!!! (10/10)
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Debbb |
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Oct 30, 2000 |
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Pretty good, but I agree it lacked intensity at times. Still, a fun story to read though. (6/10)
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Richard |
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Oct 26, 2000 |
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Great story (9/10)
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hyphen 666 |
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Oct 25, 2000 |
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I hated to see this story end, or did it? I have never read a better story of this type, and this genre is one of my favorites. I'm a bit confused and disappointed by the repetition of Danielle's office memo. It should have been from either Terri or Michelle naming the other as the new second place victim. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Oct 20, 2000 |
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Not a bad story, but could have been more intense. (8/10)
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bowman mars |
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Oct 19, 2000 |
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Ms. Madison is able to describe details of her humiliation to keep me in a forest of woodies! (10/10)
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johe |
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Oct 18, 2000 |
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Very good story and well written. A pleasure to read. (8/10)
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Kim |
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Sep 21, 2000 |
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Quite a good story, a 5 or 6. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
missy(M) |
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Sep 21, 2000 |
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the intensity of terri's humiliation makes this submissive yearn...... (9/10)
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ABrunetteWoman |
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Sep 12, 2000 |
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Good story, bit too far-fetched at times, but generally quite well written. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Allstar |
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Sep 12, 2000 |
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Is there a better writer in the genre than Terri Madison? Once you get over the suspension of disbelief necessary for any story of this type, you have possibly the hottest tale on the Net. (10/10)
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phoenix |
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Jul 26, 2000 |
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Very well-written. Captures the woman's anguish and humiliation perfectly. (9/10)
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pk |
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Jul 21, 2000 |
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One of the few stories without the "and suddenly she loved it" crap. Great! (10/10)
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