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Karen and the Torture Club
Author: Richard
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(Added on Feb 4, 2005)
(This month 184736 readers) (Total 238507 readers) |
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Karen and her husband find that they enjoy S&M and that it has rejuvinated their relationship. They reply to an advertisement for couples to join a club in which one of the ladies is randomly slected at each meeting to "put on a show" meaning that she will be the one to be tortured that night. Karen's experiences in the club and other events outside the club give her all the experiences that she and her husband desire. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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fundagirl
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Nov 29, 2014 |
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Great story. I liked the development of characters over various chapters. I would love to see another chapter (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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Okay, here's a few metaphores: a whirlwind, a roller coaster ride, a tidal wave, a landslide, an eye-opener and last but not in the least, tho not a metaphore, an extremely well written story.
JJ (10/10)
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Mermaid Master
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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Extremely well done piece. I woul dlove to see more by this author. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jun 6, 2005 |
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A skillfully written imaginative tale with characters so real they could easily be your neighbors ( if you lived down under and knew a lot of kinky friends) A story of this quality, length and breadth could have become an e-novel it's that good. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Sweep
(Edit) (Jun 7, 2005)
- Thanks Mate,
I really appreciate your comments. It is very encouraging and even though I had vowed and declared never to write another story, the nice comments by folks such as yourself is making me think that maybe I should try again.
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RhondaLee
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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Some ideas are new and creative. The jump from First Person conversation narrative to Third Person narrative describing the intensity of the feelings (the pain and scream) is not as strong as First Person narrative. Since some part of the story is already in First Person form, the suffering part of the victim should be in First Person narrative as well. (8/10)
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Sweep
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2005)
- Hi RhondaLee,
Thanks for your review.
I presume from your Id that you are a girl. I am surprised that the majority of the reviews are form ladies. Was there any part of the story that you liked the best?
Thanks again
Richard
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jbowler65
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Feb 21, 2005 |
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Excellent story. We loved the public humiliation and the anticipation of the night to come was well described and vivid. (10/10)
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Sweep
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2005)
- Hi guys,
Thanks for your review.
I presume from your Id that you are a couple. I am surprised that the majority of the reviews are from ladies. Was there any part of the story that you liked the best?
Thanks again
Richard
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jbowler65
(Edit) (Mar 26, 2005)
- You are correct that we are a couple that enjoy this type of story and lifestyle. We liked the earlier chapters better, but it was mostly due to not really being into the branding scene.
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Barbara Anne
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Feb 18, 2005 |
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This startlingly erotic tale could easily compete with "The Story Of O", worthy of being filmed in the rugged background, of the Australian Outback. What is it that drives our competitive nature, to experience the ultimate pain, exposed as lewdly as possible? [Childbirth readily accepted, as the price for loving penetration, by Women Worldwide,]
Public humiliation is a benefit, I know, but the ecstacy in gifting our lovers' a sense of pride, power & pleasure surpasses all other sensations. Perhaps not so extreme as this story but equally satisfying to fantasise about, in our nakedness, private moments in bed or orgies of madness. In public life we strive to retain composure, but among like-minded devotees the participants of a movie, based on Richards story would be worthy of 'Oscar' nominations, if true. Richard, contact nzgsk@hotmail.com, for Email discussion only. (10/10)
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zirgss
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Feb 14, 2005 |
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10 x 10 points! (10/10)
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La Toya
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Feb 12, 2005 |
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This is one of the best written stories I have read in a while. This is a story that could be published, or even done as a movie.
Should you wish to add to it, I am sure you would have even more readers, and who knows maybe an offer to publish. (10/10)
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lil dragon
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Feb 10, 2005 |
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This is extremely erotic, perhaps because it is so believeable. Wonderfully written, this one will stay with me for some time, it is rare for me to become so involved with a story as i have done with this; keep on writing - i will be watching for future material, perhaps in published print(?) (10/10)
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longrover
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Feb 8, 2005 |
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Excellent plot, characters, settings, and variety. Carefull, thorough progression from beginning to end. Very well done. (10/10)
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ultimatesubbie
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Feb 7, 2005 |
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Yay! An aussie -content story! I really enjoyed it. Look forward to reading more. (8/10)
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LordVetinari
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Feb 6, 2005 |
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I loved it. I enjoy stories of this sort, most definitely. The story telling was quite erotic, and left enough details for me to fill in in my imagination, while still filling my head with ideas. The Australian perspective was extra intriguing to me as a Yank. Keep up the good work! (8/10)
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littleslut
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Feb 6, 2005 |
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a well written story that sucks you in (10/10)
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GuyInCellar
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Feb 5, 2005 |
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Very nicely written; good atmosphere and characters; just the sort of club most of us would like to join, I would imagine.
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Sweep
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Feb 4, 2005 |
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This had a real credible story - in fact it seems true (I hope it is). The detail is excellent and you can really get into the head of the characters. The torture scenes are imaginative, well described and very erotic. (10/10)
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