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Poker Wife
Author: Not My Story
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(Added on Feb 4, 2005)
(This month 242325 readers) (Total 302920 readers) |
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A young bride is tricked into having sex with her husbands friends. She falls deeper into degradtion as she is blackmailed into becoming a sex slave for the pleasures of others. She discovers this has all been done to her to get revenge on her older sister but it is already to late for poor Lisa. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
happi
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Nov 6, 2011 |
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good ideas hope you will do pently more would love to see a wife like that (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Rook
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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Great story. Although a bit unrealistic, it definately kept me turned on. The ending though, did put a damper on it. The characters, settings and sexual description was very good and detailing. This story is in my 10 ten. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 21, 2005 |
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An absolutely terrific tale -- until the entrance of Teri the sister. Got too weighted down with plot manipulations then. Lost its momentum. Until then, a great read, excellently done. Difficult to pull off, the nc descent into degradation. Initial twist (the poker game) a reach, but acceptable within the genre. Intended to give it a 10, but the last three or four chapters took away. Sometimes, less is more. Look forward to rrading more of your efforts. Thanks. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Fargrace
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Mar 7, 2005 |
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This is actually one of my favorite stories on the site. You do great work with all your blackmail. I thought you did awesome with the beginning, but then it seemed that you got a bit long winded and lost track of what you were originally writing about. It might have been good to stop after they made up too. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
BDSgirl
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Feb 10, 2005 |
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the story was good, but i thought somethings were bit annoying. just little grammatical errors, and sometimes the story seemed to get abit lost and ramble a bit.felt it would be better with some editing maybe. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
feelfree2mailme
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Feb 8, 2005 |
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One of the most exciting stories... (10/10)
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