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The Choice
Author: Templer2187
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(Added on Jan 29, 2005)
(This month 33576 readers) (Total 49081 readers) |
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......If I can accurately gauge your sex life and describe your wishes, I want you to choose to leave the party and come with me. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
rozsub4
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Jul 28, 2014 |
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Thank you Templer. I know exactly how Jenny feels, the story was wonderful. Challenging yet ultimately safe; even if she didn't know it. I like that you have pushed boundaries but kept many elements very true to life. It was so real and vivid. You are very creative. Please write more.
roz (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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Good story, but to my dismay Templer presents us with a beforehand molded submissive who virtually succombs in the second paragraph.
Like bigcat, La Toya and Lordvetinari pointed out, the behind-the-scenes slaver society, complete with secluded private island, comes across as a cheap first draft for a, luckily, never made James Bond movie. Tedious.
Nice read overall.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 31, 2008 |
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niice job (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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May 28, 2006 |
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Well executed though standard "island" plot, which, personally, is not my thing. Sloppiness of mechanics interfered somewhat with my enjoyment. But still, highly erotic stuff. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Jan 30, 2005 |
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Very well done story. The island part, sorry I just think its been done one to many times. I would like to see were you take any other chapters. (9/10)
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mstressXXX
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Jan 30, 2005 |
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Very well-written story, with both excitement,
and intrigue. I hope to hear further chapters
of her adventures. Keep up the good work! (10/10)
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LordVetinari
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Jan 30, 2005 |
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While the "society of slaveowners and slaves, with a private island" is a bit cliched, this was well-done, and the tortures were reasonably rigourous. A good read, and I hope there is another chapter. (8/10)
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