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Emma's Enslavery
Author: Irb784
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(Added on Jan 24, 2005)
(This month 69120 readers) (Total 91139 readers) |
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Emma finds herself stranded in a foreign country without the funds or means to get home. She falls into the hands of a Domme who in turn sells the unsuspecting Emma to a Master who wants to train her as his slave. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 3, 2006 |
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Nice story. The mixtures of pain and kindness of the Dom make it pleasant to read. It is not free brutality. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jan 28, 2005 |
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This reader can find little to be outraged about so far in this story. Admittedly there isn't anything original here but the writing is fine, even though I don't speak Australian, the character development is taking hold and it appears that there is much more to be said before this one has run its course. It's a bit too linear for my tastes, but I'm sure it will appeal to a certain fraction of readers who are interested in good writing and a story that just might have a happy ending. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bloodlineS
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Jan 27, 2005 |
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Very poor writing style. Entire events and scenes are played out in 2 or 3 sentences. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
Irb784
(Edit) (Apr 7, 2005)
- For a 3/10 not much to say as far as constructive criticism goes
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| Reviewer:
spicey
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Jan 26, 2005 |
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The story is well written and takes some interesting turns and twists. Hoping there will be a sequel to see how emma adapts to her slavery. I liked it! (9/10)
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