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Karmals Slavery
Author: Tom Snel
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(Added on Jan 24, 2005)
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Karmal is a young woman who is captured and sold into slavery. She turns out to be a very good slave. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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So far so good for the start, i hope you plan to add more chapters over time (7/10)
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jeanne
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Feb 2, 2005 |
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I completely agree with the other reviewers that the story is not original and quite incredibly extreme. So what can I say except... MORE! (more chapters and more torture!) (add a bonus point for the author's good taste in insisting on a thorough self-depilation as part of the enslaving process...) (8/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 28, 2005 |
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Without a doubt a tremendously overused plot. 'Plenty of mindless sex and pain; extremely light on plot creativity. Beaten, beaten, work unbelievably, beaten, beaten, sleep. never eat, never use the toilet. Mindless, tremendously cruel. If you're into hard or extreme torture, this is for you. (6/10)
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lex ludite
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Jan 27, 2005 |
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If you are into mindless sex and violence and plenty of it, this one is for you. There is absolutely nothing original about this story and most of it borders on the unbelievable including the ability of the heroine to take awesome amounts of punishment, raping and perhaps even accommodating a kitchen sink on occasion, not to mention her world class ability as a distance runner. The one thing that really bothered me was her total familiarity with the slave world and her ability to recognize with ease such exotic items as a fucking bench. What separates a fucking bench from a regular bench? Beats me? The editing goes south on a number of occasions, probably because the author was too busy having another vision that was so good that he couldn't stand to go over it again for fear of having one of those nasty accidents that we men and some women have from time to time. If you turn off your brain and keep repeating "this is only a fantasy", you might thoroughly enjoy this over the top romp of the imagination. Welcome to the wacky world of hard-edged writing, the site could use more of it in this reader's opinion. (7/10)
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