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Pavlov's Dog
Author: Trystl
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(Added on Jan 11, 2005)
(This month 72092 readers) (Total 95120 readers) |
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Follows a young girl's growing fascination with bondage and helpless pain, as it leads her down a dark and dangerous road. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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Great psychological vignette, bursting with eroticsism at the seams, thanks to the well-worded musings and actions/reactions of sally.
A real shame this is Trystl's only story.
JJ (10/10)
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kaleun76
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May 20, 2006 |
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Really good. Keeps you wondering (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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Nice bit of writing (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tsosie
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Jan 20, 2005 |
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Very nicely done. Very nice twists, all around great. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Jan 15, 2005 |
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A hard story to catagorize, but very well written. I was remined a bit of the "Story of O", not so much in content but in the fact that things are implied. The twist at the end of chapter 2/being of 3 I was not expecting.
If your looking for "jack off" material this story isn't it. But if your looking for a possible look into a submissive's mind...this is a good of place to start as any.
Highly recommended. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Griezz
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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Great piece of work! You've got it so that the story can be either self-contained or have a few more chapters. The first chapter was extremely well-done, since, by not defining who the young lady watching was, it's left up to the reader to decide whether it's the heroine watching some other young woman, whether it's someone else watching the heroine's demise, or whether it's her watching her own movie (making it not really a snuff film after all). Everything is open to inpterpretation or viewpoints, but it's still descriptive enough to satisfy the reader. Well done! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Jan 13, 2005 |
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Well thought out fantasy and well written.
An excellent twist in chapter 3.
I'll leave this an 8 until there is an "ending".
(8/10)
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lindakaye
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Jan 13, 2005 |
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I am a believer in people being able to write their thoughts or fantasies.. This was a fantasy and very well written.. leaves you wondering ... (8/10)
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