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Closing the Deal
Author: Golffdude
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(Added on Jan 11, 2005)
(This month 14470 readers) (Total 27678 readers) |
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Deeding title to her body to another a woman is crated and shipped to another city to his entertain clients Then recrated and shipped home to her husband. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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this is the type of theme i would like to see more often where it is not the same simialr idea as soo many already posted (9/10)
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xezeras
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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i really love this story,my only complain was that vicki was not treated a little rougher by her owner. (9/10)
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LordVetinari
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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What an interesting concept. It was well-executed, and enjoyable. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jan 12, 2005 |
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I liked reading "Closing the Deal". It was a pleasant change from the stories I have been reading lately. They all seemed the same. Don't thingk I would have handed the whole deeding out thing as well as she did but hey, who knows.
The story was well written with a nice steady pace. The story was not bogged down with details about every little thng but you knew exactly what you needed to know. I hope to read more of your work in the future. (7/10)
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