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Banking the Rewards
Author: Sylvian
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(Added on Jan 8, 2005)
(This month 8884 readers) (Total 21398 readers) |
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While his partner takes a bank manager to rob his bank a man is left with the mangers wife and daughter to do what he pleases. Using the daughter as bait he is able to force the wife to do whatever he wants. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 8, 2005 |
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thw hole premise of the story is good, but everything was written way to fast (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Sylvian
(Edit) (Jan 9, 2005)
- Thank you for your review. I appreciate your input as this is my first story. I am working on Part two where things will be taken much more slowly.
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