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The Perfect Job
Author: Sam Dan
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(Added on Jan 3, 2005)
(This month 24714 readers) (Total 45711 readers) |
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A college graduate lands the perfect job, with the perfect boss: A woman who takes him deep into wretched submission. The dream job of every submissive! This story is in three parts. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 21, 2005 |
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Wow! Quite a trip in the debasement genre. Well done. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jan 15, 2005 |
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Pretty good story. A grammatical error here and there but nothing major. I do see this more as a starter page than just a one page story. There was not much in the way of chararcter build-up, foreplay if you will. You just jumped right into it, like you were starting from the middle of the story. Because of this everything seemed rushed, like the reader was playing catch up like, he had missed something. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
duchifat
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Jan 6, 2005 |
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it`s going too fast and without any logic (6/10)
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