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A Cheerleader's Story
Author: Jim Hale
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(Added on Dec 29, 2004)
(This month 164168 readers) (Total 292730 readers) |
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Lindsey believed cheerleading was her life. She discovered other things about herself while trying to make the team. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
harve3jabot
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Jul 14, 2008 |
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very believable and written with good imagination, descriptions and believable commentary.
Good raunch, not too gross but pretty degrading. I especially enjoy the description of the submissive feelings coming to the surface and the power exchange. Up to Ch.3, looking forward to the rest! (8/10)
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azrlg17
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Nov 22, 2006 |
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Good story but I was a bit disappointed that Sammy's mom was the first do get Lindsey to swallow. Also I would have liked to see more tender moments between Sammy and Lindsey.
The story has a logical break in it. At the beginning it's this journey of two girls discovering what they like. There's no lying from the Dom it even says when she saw her she thought she would make a great base. Then you find out she already has an even better base, she lied and she did everything more or less because of peer pressure. A "real" Dom doesn't succumb to peer pressure IMHO.
I would give the first part an 8 and the second part a 5 or 6. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Mar 14, 2006 |
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Good Dom/sub tale with degradation. Scat not my thing but well done. (9/10)
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dennyk858
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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Jim Hale, in my opinion, the the best author on this board in the area of dom/sub relationships. I especially like the F/f aspects of this story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
themaneloco
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Mar 8, 2006 |
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An excellent story. Not too keen on the scat side of things myself, but everything else is great. (9/10)
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emmacd
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Feb 16, 2005 |
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You kept my attention through all the chapters. I waited and waite for her to have to swallow her turd. I wouldlike to see more chapters. emmacd (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 2, 2005 |
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nothing much better then this type story (9/10)
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ssarajohnson
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Dec 30, 2004 |
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Great story, please write more and the more degradation and slavery that can be imposed the better. Thanks. (9/10)
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