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Hot Cross Buns
Author: melody
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(Added on Dec 18, 2004)
(This month 9896 readers) (Total 22396 readers) |
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Melody has some work done by two builders who she has teased. |
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| Reviewer:
Spitman
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Dec 19, 2004 |
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A nice erotic story, well written and refreshingly British! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Dec 19, 2004 |
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A cute story, nicely written. Only thing I can say regularly confused was the use of 'fanny' to describe the woman's frontside. To the best of my experience (and my dictionary), fanny has to do only with the buttocks. Perhaps it is used differently in other countries.
Keep writing! You have a literate, easily readable style, and a pleasantly humorous manner. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Spitman
(Edit) (Dec 19, 2004)
- The term 'fanny' is also used in classical erotic literature and some modern usage, especially in Britain, as a more general term for the female genitalia.
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