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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
himannv
(Edit) |
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Dec 28, 2011 |
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Interesting story and I found it to have an interesting plot on the whole. It got a bit dull for me towards the end but plenty of positives. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Dec 23, 2004 |
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I had a LOT of issues with readability in this story. I have said it before, and I will say it again: USE SPELLCHECK! It's not that hard. It's just one button. Then, PLEASE, ask someone (preferrably someone well-versed in the syntax of the English language) to read over the story and find any grammatical and structural errors that spellcheck can't find.
That said, the content of the story is pretty promising. It's my opinion that the story would be a pretty good one with the aforementioned corrections to structure. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
EngineX
(Edit) |
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Dec 12, 2004 |
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I like where you're going with this (don't agree with mkemse about the plot direction). I see plenty of opportunity for more humiliation and a gradual decent into slavery in the hands of her evil lodgers... The pacing is just about right and the way you've broken up the story into periods of false hope followed by worse to come adds to the realism and eroticism of your victim's predicament. More please! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 12, 2004 |
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it started out real hot, then strted to loose it, i hope you go back to the humilaition she suffered at the hands of the load officer (7/10)
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