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Personal Assistant
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Dec 11, 2004)
(This month 53378 readers) (Total 70059 readers) |
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Brenda is the Personal Assistant to the Director of Marketing at Mentone Industries, a chauvinistic corporation that believes men are meant to be managers and women are to be treated like children. (Note: This is an excerpt, the first chapter of the author's published E-novel.) |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Dec 23, 2004 |
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I can't say that a 7 - "Good. Worth reading" is applicable. The grammar, sentence structure and so forth is just fine, but this strikes me as just background without any merit of itself. Given the author's history, I need to rate this chapter as a stand-alone story, and this one just doesn't stand alone. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Dec 13, 2004 |
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Well crafted tale that utilized our imagination whilst providing an entertaining glimpse into the promise of reverse domination in the work-place. Written with the merest element of ironic humour, combined with erotic taste, to qualify for a 10! Well worth a read. (10/10)
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ms2bused
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Dec 13, 2004 |
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All your stories are incomparable so I just know this one will be also. Simply cannot wait for the continuing chapters!
If only your fabulous talents could be turned even one time to include one female, mentally overpowering and enslaving another and her then using that power to tease and torment the other woman, I, for one, would be eternally grateful!
An avid fan,
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien) (10/10)
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duchifat
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Dec 11, 2004 |
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the problem is that Mrs. Diaz allways publish the first chapter only.What about the rest ?and u really love Her stories.So please? (10/10)
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