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Option Two: the Edwardian Proposal
Author: Jill Crokett
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(Added on Dec 11, 2004)
(This month 88888 readers) (Total 127717 readers) |
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An advanced race of human-like aliens seek the random total submission of Earth's men, women and children. Let the harvest begin. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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very enjoyabled to read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tenebrous
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Oct 4, 2005 |
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I enjioyed this very much,and look forward to the next episode. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Jun 23, 2005 |
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I have mixed emotions about this story. The idea isn't bad, but I'm not taken by any of the charaters. Your narrator seems like an interesting guy, concentrate more on him.
It's not erotic or that entertaining. That being said, I liked the premise and can see this developing into a major piece of work given a few rewrites and time. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Dec 18, 2004 |
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Ms Crokett, this is the beginning of what could be a major story, and one with many possibilities. So far, it is crafted well and grasps the reader tightly, getting one deep into the action.
It hasn't been in the least erotic yet; I'm guessing that's to come in chapters 3+, but I'm anxious to see more.
Waaaaay too many editing errors in chapter 4. Don't rush to get them in, have an editor read the story and fix it for you! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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The story is very different, and very creative. I don't think you should have posted it yet however. 19k is pretty small, even for a short story, especially when one like this has such potential. I know I WONT be reading the next update, but will just wait for you to finish. (8/10)
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