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The Rite
Author: Doug Smith
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(Added on Dec 3, 2004)
(This month 49963 readers) (Total 61047 readers) |
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A battle of wills. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 25, 2007 |
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nicely written (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mgmoore
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Dec 10, 2004 |
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Good story but a few misused words/typos spell check will ignore mistakes that are spelled right. You need to read it over one last time before you send it in. You'll do better in the next contest. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
sparty
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2004)
- Hi,
Thanks for the comments. I agree, the story needs a good couple of revisions. I finished it in a hurry for the contest. It came together kinda late.
I will post the revisions when done.
At any rate thanks for the comments, they are appreciated.
Doug
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Dec 8, 2004 |
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Not bad was just expecting more but hell it is only part one. (8/10)
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